You have something to work on indeed, but you'll get there if you try hard enough. The high pitched lead is a bit too agressive in its way of changing around. maybe substitute the chords a bit, so they stay in the same general area. if the tempo was slower, the bass would fit nicely in a build. I personally wouldn't upload anything in this state, unless i wanted feedback/help with how to go further with the track, which i guess is what you're after.
Anyway have a nice day and keep improving.
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Something im working on. Also, if you have any ideas for the name, leave them in the reactions. cause i dont have any ideas.
edit: it's a WIP, wich stands for Work In Progress. there are still gonna be made a lot of changes to make it better.
QruintroX responds:
Thanks for the tips! I personally uploaded it because i like to share some melody's and things that i came up with. This way people can also hear some stuff that i'm working on without having to wait a month for a full song.
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