ADD SIDECHAIN AAAAAAAAAAAAA

Now seriously, the sound design and mixing are decent but a lack of sidechaining can greatly reduce a song's quality. If you did add sidechaining, it's almost non-existent. Make sure to not Oversidechain it to the point that every time a kick hits every sound goes completely silent, there are always sweet spots.
The 2nd melody(?) at 00:42 has a dissonance problem, mainly at the 3rd and 4th bars.
I like the key change at 01:46 but you could have done a bit more with it, and there is some random sound at 02:01.