Beginning: Not to shabby! just a bit repetitive.
1:15: love the drop!
2:22: sounds like laser guns from star wars, which makes it interesting.
3:39 again, great drop!
Ending: Brilliant! The ending is amazing!
I honestly wouldn't have listened to this song if i hadn't have skipped a bit of the repetitive beginning. You have the makings of a great song writer!
Score:
9.5/10