I am LOVING the lo-finess of this track. Definitely needs a drum sample or so to go on top of everything. I would make the Vocaloid have less "cute" and maybe a bit more "Expressive" so make it sound less like a child and more like an adult, but meh.
Pretty solid overall.
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I was just messing around with some piano and decided to finally give my Vocaloid program a shot.
This is what it came out as.
Hope you enjoy it.
Nice ambient
ok.
What you have here has huge potential. I think the piano is cute. The vocal synth, though abrasive has a good melody.
I would remove the vinyl scratch sample. Change the vocal synth to a horn or viola with tremolo. Then throw a glitch breakbeat.
Be brave, add the beat. A melodic bass. Some subtle side motifs. Make a 7 a 10.
5 as always
pbj
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