New(ish) beat!

Originally the last track (before the outro) on my last LP, Caphemeral Nights, I have decided to rap over this (some bars about the fickleness of believing in the afterlife... not yet written.) and include it on my upcoming debut rap album, 'Avatar Caine.'

The hook comes from Das EFX's 'Real Hip Hop.' The original version of this included the first two verses of the acapella, as I sometimes like doing that, in the vein of a lot of other lofi producers.

The guitar and choir come from Finnish metal band Swallow the Sun.

Thoughts?

Please leave your honest opinion!

SAMPLE: Swallow the Sun (guitar, choir)

SAMPLE: Das Efx (hook)

Lyrics:

This style of mine's well defined like Webster's!

Represent real Hip Hop with the rhyme (Word up!)

Original: https://libbyshimmz.bandcamp.com/track/eternal-life