Really cool; I think that this would be great with some 808s during the drop (or really any kind of bassline since at the moment it sounds like it's only the future bass synth and drums)
I'm not a huge fan of the buildup/breaks though. The vocals are out of key and tempo, and the overall background is pretty bland and empty.
Overall, I think with some work on the buildups/breaks, a heavier bass in the drop, and some EQ/mixing/mastering work, this could be really cool. :)