The songwriting is really good here. I wish there was more. What is there could be fleshed out a bit, too. I like the idea of adding some drums or something percussive, because as it is right now it feels like it builds and builds but then suddenly stops building. I keep waiting for the music to get going and take me on the trip I hope it takes me on but all I get is a glimpse of what is to come. If it's finished, I hope you can take in what I have to say for future projects. If it is not finished, the prospect of seeing what the end result could be is exciting to me, and I'll look forward to when this project is completed.

Keep it up! :)