That's a Good Music
This one was lyrically important to me, and I wanted to tell a story here.
Glad to be back at it.
LYRICS:
Inside
You're mine
What a game we play
This time
You'll find
Nothing you can say
The shame
This blame
You tell me it's okay
But you wont go away
Open your eyes and see
Your lies, my misery
You broke down everything we had
You're a failure of empathy
Won't stop letting go of me
Picking up the stones you never cast
You own
The stones
To cover up my bones
I'll save
My grave
For you to come back home
This mess
Endless
Guess I should have known
That you'd leave me alone
Open your eyes and see
Your lies, my misery
You broke down everything we had
You're a failure of empathy
Won't stop letting go of me
Picking up the stones you never cast
You own
The stones
To cover up my bones
I'll save
My grave
For you to come back home
You need to...
Open your eyes and see
Your lies, my misery
You broke down everything we had
(Won't go away)
You're a failure of empathy
Won't stop letting go of me
Picking up the stones you never cast.
(Leave me alone)
You're a failure of empathy
Won't stop letting go of me
Picking up the stones you never cast.
That's a Good Music
Killer work man, haha, keep it up!
Thanks man. 🤘🤘🤘
ok.
As a piece of music it's good. Bags of potential. Well recorded vocals. Guitars are good. Not my genre. But I think your draw is in your vocals, they have potential over a range of genres.
Drums.....god damn awful. Fruity Loops? Get XLN addictive drums. These drums don't cut it.
Your volume....loud does not equate to good. Tame it back about 6db, thin the parts. Let it breathe. Your mix is seriously lacking high end. Brighten it, be expressive. The riffs are good, the playing is good, your vocal is too.
Vocal wise, I can tell you didn't sing this at full volume. Probably due to home environment. If you get an opportunity to hit a studio you will shine.
Again not my genre but I can hear the potential.
5 as always
pbj
That's what I call a review.
The two songs are currently only demos, so hopefully the final mixes improve drastically on these points.
You fucking rule for this post.
Thank you!
This track is actually dope man. Im really diggin it.
Thank you! :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.