I like the relaxed, bright mood at the beginning. The snare sample at :08 wasn’t my favorite. It might have a tad too much treble for my tastes. I also think the piece could use more bass in general at times. The texture at :33 has a nice and refreshing vibe, and overall I really like the melodic sections of the piece and the glitchy rhythmic details. The piece gets a tad repetitive towards the end, and probably needed some more variety on some of the main riffs to hit it home. Some more structuring might also work well, as it’s relatively short right now and lacks a full-length breakdown or bridge. Still, the sound design is really fun here, and I’m enjoying the mixing and melodies as well. Keep at it, icantpronouncethis! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8.5/10

Wow you have such a cool and unique style. Super neat stuff

Love your style. Your quirkiness works so well, and yes midimachine is right on about the guitar. I'm a fan. We need more originality like this in the world.

sounds like u got some mastering tips from some idiot recently :^)
the octaved guitar sounds so hot! love this style