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Girl of my dreams

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Chapter three: Girl of my dreams

-Dream-

A field, green and giant, in the center. floor made with round shaped tiles, very elegant as a dance floor. The same figure that I saw before is dancing again in the middle of the field. I must take advantage.

I'm very close, I think I can see it clearl--

Q: Are you in lo-?
A: Y-yes, I think i am
Q: Do you want to be with her?
A: I wish it
Q: Will you take care of it?
A: Of course

Could you tell me why you were dancing around me? I was mesmerized by that tender look, trapped in his beautiful eyes.

Girl: I'm in...-

-Awake-

Sample: Les Baxter- Felicia my love

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I like the smooth, cinematic strings and flutes and the beats here. The compression is a bit heavy, but I’m more worried about the lack of lower frequencies in the texture. The melodic breakdown at :51 is nice, but otherwise the piece doesn’t really feel structurally complete. It’s also a bit disjointed with the arrangement, as the composition seems to be of an ABC form without much structural repetition. Overall, I think you need to flesh out the composition a lot more and balance the frequencies a bit better, but I did enjoy the sound design, mood, and atmosphere of the piece. Keep at it, Ruko29! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7/10

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Ruko29
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Uploaded
Aug 6, 2019
8:03 PM EDT
Genre
Hip Hop - Olskool
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2 MB
2 min 9 sec
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