I like the airy atmosphere and drums at the beginning, although I might’ve liked to hear a more gradual introduction to the piece. The crackling in the background is a tad overdone, and the progression is a bit slow-paced here. I like the section at :58 where the texture comes together a bit more, and the vocals at 1:22 add a lot of value to the texture. There’s a great sense of atmosphere here, although the mix is a little quiet and the composition could use a bit more structuring. The one-climax model is a bit risky imo, and this piece is no exception. Still, the mood, melodies, and production quality are strong here. Keep at it, WolfgangMiakoda! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.25/1
Composite score
8/10