I like the atmosphere at the beginning and the vocal samples. The bass at :09 is a little heavy, and the drums could use a little reigning in on the volume levels, especially the kicks. I think the mood and sound design is good, although the composition is clearly not complete. It has a nice bouncy vibe to it, though, and I hope you’ll still finish this piece. Please send me a PM when you do, and I’ll give you a full review. Keep at it, SlyFrost! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.25/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
5.5/10

Don't be upset, that sounds good. I like this atmospheric start, it's really great. You still have much to grow, well done :3