The melodies and the general layout is really great!

The beginning is amazing. I really love it!
0:14 has a really well-made melody, but the sound spoils it a bit in my opinion.

The build-up to the drop is a bit too slow in my opinion. The whole thing lasts for almost a minute and it feels like it's just a long build-up to something bigger. I feel like 0:41-0:53 could be deleted, it doesn't really add much to the song and it'd be just fine without it I'm pretty sure.

The drop is awesome! I feel like it could have been mixed a bit better. For the first half, the melody is a bit overwhelmed by the rest of song the song. In the second half, while the filter is being used, some unpleasant distortions can be heard :/

I really like the melody at 3:00!

The second build-up doesn't last as long as the first one, and I really appreciate that!

Of course near the end the amazing drop again! :)

I really like the melody is the ending, but it feels unfull. It just kinda stops in the middle. To fix that you'd have to use a lower-pitched sound.

Overall a really great song!
I'd say 4,2/5