Ooooooo I like this. Kinda 92 trance house.

Your synth choices are fine, beat fine, structure fine.

You are let down by volume again. I promise you LOUD does not equate to good. Just rein your levels in apply high and low cuts relative to where you want your parts to be higher or lower. Utilize some panning and run some multi band compression. I'd say 10db lower before post production, aim for a non clipping mix at -2d on the master, make sure at each stage there are no clips.

always 5.

pitbulljones

I really like the creativity you put in this track, how you designed each sound (especially the "metallic" sound around 2:12) and how these quite different sounds create an interesting atmosphere.
The main problem for me is that it gets a bit too chaotic and some of the sounds don´t complement eachother well f.e. around 1:00 when the choir gets higher. The best parts are when the choir is more in the backround and lower f.e. 2:30-3:30.
Still a very epic and interesting track even if a bit messy at points :)