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Wobinidan - Leaning Out

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Author Comments

this one is pretty mellow

Reviews


Gorgeous

Laid back, this tune is another one of yours that just flows out effortlessly, quite nice.



why doesnt this half more downloads!?

this is a kickass track dude!

when I first heard your voice, it reminded me of Layne Staley from Alice In Chains. it even has a nice grungy acoustic touch to it. very nice vocals in here, and I can understand the vocals.

well panned and mastered acoustic tones. very crisp and clear. love the fingerpicked melodies that glide across the strings. love the little lead riffs that fits so nicely with the rest of the track. Love the pieces put together in the track, has a very nice major-minor track. I hear some nice vocal oohs in the background too, pretty sweet.

the drums are cool as well, nice beats and patterns. also the beatboxing was pretty cool and original as well, cant say you hear a lot of people in acoustic folk music do this type of stuff.

I dont know about the ending tho, it doesnt exactly take away from the track, but it is just kinda pointless to me. I wouldnt have bothered including it in there IMO.

the clarity is already excellent as it is, but there could be a few things you can do to make it top notch, which is up to you, I wouldnt care myself. include some more bass melodies in here. you've got a cool "bassline" as it is(what I mean is the chord tones that are played on the the lower strings of your guitar) but it can be more audible if you add an actual bass in there. the vocals seem a little bit low relative to the track, and can be brought out more. you're beatboxing is fine as it is, but you could probably sharpen up your techniques a bit. just a bit ;). i dont know how you would be able to make them more distinguishable between the actual drums tho..hey i'm the critiquer not the creator >_>

anyway, real kickass stuff in here, I'm impressed. upload some more cool stuff alright!


wobinidan responds:

Wow, thanks a lot for this review, you offer some really sound advice that I am going to take on board. Actually I feel like giving a review to your review! 10/10!

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Credits & Info

wobinidan
Author

Listens
715
Downloads
96
Votes
11
Score
2.97 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 13, 2007
8:52 PM EDT
Genre
Indie
File Info
Song
3.3 MB
4 min 48 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.