I feel trhat this song only has one way to be better. when your singing "keep it short stick to the point theres no time anymore for pissing around~~Ive wasted time now ive fallen into~~ the clouds drifting by~~A blanket of of darkness, and comfort freeze, no regrets and [break into]."
...Could you make it so, theres a custom version with "Break into me" instead?
I love this one, it's light, dark and pretty at the same time. It's been said allready, but you either need to up the vocals when you mix it or sing louder (which is actually going very well in the new uploads).
Trying this with a female vocalist might be a nice idea, but I'm quite partial to your voice.
Love the piano in the center of the song, it adds something bright.
Good song - poor vocals.
This song would be excellent with a female lead vocal. Dont' know if I can convince you to rerecord the vocal track with a female :p Then it would go in my mp3 player for listening to regularly The segment where you are singing twice would be suited to your voice in the background.
i do like the melody and stuff
you're vocals could have been louder
it sounds like you need to sing louder in general
to get the full tone of one's voice, you have to sing quite loud
just stand farther away from your mic, or turn down the recieving on it.
your voice sounds like if you really opened up and sang loudly you could get a great tone
and yes like someone else said, a female humming/singing in the background would be absolutely wonderful
I like it :)
Timing could use a bit of work, your melodies, a difference choice of words 'pissing around?' lol The sound is really good. Other than all that, I love it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.