The beat at the beginning is catchy, although the bass instrument sounds a bit unpolished and indistinct, and could use some cleaning up in the mix. The rhythmic content is catchy, and I’m enjoying the progression despite the odd sudden transition or two. The melodic section at 1:13 feels really cathartic, and there’s a pleasant sense of atmosphere given the synth arpeggios here. The mix is a tad quiet throughout, and I you could’ve done more creative work with the drums at times. I like how you isolated that one melodic synth at 2:46, but the pause at 2:53 was a bit awkward, and the additional drum beat at 2:56 before the last melodic section came in at 3:02 seemed a bit unnecessary. Overall, the composition comes together well at the end, but the gritty bass line at 3:39 and the somewhat sudden ending seemed a bit forced in. Still, nice work with the sound design, atmosphere, rhythmic content, and melodies. Keep at it, Rukyyy! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.25/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
7.5/10