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I can hear where your month has gone. Its very well written, part for part.

1:20 excels. I think your instrument choice is perfect.

Your piano, is too bassy in comparision with the rest of your song. A lack of dynamics and a flat eq hurts the mix. No panning, which for an orchestral piece is disheartening.

It develops well, and movement between phrases is great.

That month you spent writing, spend another producing, you then have work to demo to studios.

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Good :D