I like the atmospheric pads at the beginning, although the bass at :15 is a little too loud. The mix as a whole is very quiet, and the beat at :44 is also very loud relative to the other elements of the mix. There are a lot of harsh clicks in the texture, and the entrance at 1:01 is pretty sudden. The harmonies of the piece are enjoyable, but the piece has a pretty minimal texture throughout and a pretty simplistic overarching structure. I’d suggest using a few more mixing effects to give this piece some more atmosphere - reverb, delay, etc. You could start by using an equalizer to take some of the treble tones off of those stereo clicks. Overall, this is a catchy beat with some cool melodic ideas mixed in, but the production issues and underwhelming composition detract from my enjoyment of it. Keep at it, TheB34R! :)
Mixing, mastering, and balance
.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.25/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
.75/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.25/1
Composite score
3.5/10