Oooooooo them strings are mint. I thought you had too much tremolo initially but you haven't :) I shit you not your opening chords would fit nicely on a track of mine. Called Bad Seed
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/619623
High strings great, melody is great. Tone is great. I think the piano doesn't sit well, it lacks reverb and sounds separate from the mix, I'd remove it and just play single notes an octave or two lower, really emphasise the mood.
5 as always
pitbulljones