Your prologue was fairly good, not much else to say there.
0:48 to 1:30 - Very good, I like the base that you used.
1:30 to 2:00 was pretty good, but I feel like 4 repetitions is a bit much. Maybe try to harmonize a little after the 8th bar (about 1:45), or add new instruments. Just something to make sure it doesn't get old. Also a bit bouncy.
2:00 to 2:48: again, this part goes on a tad too long.
2:48 to 3:26: fairly good (for the same reason as 0:48 to 1:30), but too long
3:27 to 3:30: This didn't really match the song, and somewhat caught me off guard, though that might just be me as I generally don't like lyrics in my EDM.
3:30 to 4:10: same as 1:30 to 2:00
4:10 to 4:19: Poor ending to a decent song, in my opinion.
Overall:
Not a huge fan of this one, mostly from the lyrics that didn't really add anything to the song. This is also really repetitive. In my opinion, keep the song short and sweet. If they like it, they will come back and listen again. Don't try and extend parts, or they become old really quickly.
However, I really liked the bouncy-ish bass that you added about at 0:46. You can do crazy stuff with that, so keep going!
Chrythm 
