I like the quirky sound design and rhythmic content. You have a good sense of harmony and progression, too. That said, there’s a bit too much reverb in the texture for my tastes, and the chord progression here is pretty generic. I like the atmosphere of the piece, but the composition gets pretty repetitive after a while. The kick drum sounds pretty indistinct at 1:24, likely because of the excessive reverb, and despite the creative drumwork there isn’t a strong sense of harmonic progression in this piece. I wanted to hear some more prominent melodic content and development, but instead the composition came across as a little bland overall. There’s not much structuring in the piece, and you could use some more harmonic depth at times too. Overall, strong sense of atmosphere, sound design, and progression, but the mix is a little too watery and I wanted to hear some more compositional risks here. Keep at it, Sicarius771! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.25/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
7/10