I like the cute synths at the beginning and the melodic content. The texture at :18 sounds really full and rich, even if the drums could’ve been more creative, both in terms of the rhythmic pattern and the samples you used. The synths have a nice bouncy vibe, though, and I like the bass riff at the post-chorus at :55 too. I think you really should’ve fleshed out the structure of this piece more, though. The one-climax model is hard to pull off, and I think that’s as true here as ever. I like the dreamy ending to the piece, but I wanted to hear a little more structuring, harmonic variety, and melodic development, which is hard to accomplish in a 2-minute track. I know I’m a huge stickler for the overarching compositional elements, but overall this is really solid work. The production quality is great, the sound design is cool and refreshing, and the melodic content is fun. Keep at it, EmoshiLorenzo! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
7.75/10

The ideas are definitely there. It could use quite a bit less white noise though. I'd love to see a b section after 1:50 if you consider producing a more complete feeling song :) good luck in the contest bro.