I like the glitchy content at the beginning, and it gets easier to get a feel for the rhythm after the beat comes in at :11. I like the sound design and atmosphere of the piece too. Might even need a little more reverb to fill out the texture. That said, there’s very little variety or harmonic development in this track. The bass at :39 is a nice touch, but be careful that it’s not peaking a little when it plays with the kick at the same time. I think you needed a stronger sense of direction in this piece. It just doesn’t feel like a fully fleshed-out composition. I’d encourage you to keep working on this, though! I love the quirky sound design and rhythmic content. Keep at it, Barrzeux. :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
1/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
6.5/10