I like the catchy synths at the beginning. The chord progression is a little cliche, and I wish the drums were both louder in the mix and more creative. I also would’ve liked to see some more original sound design and structural variety here. The energy level is almost constant throughout the piece, and overall the composition just needs more fleshing-out. Still, nice work with the rhythmic components, harmonies, and rich texture. Keep at it, DaveSlayer! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
6.75/10

Idea is veeeery interesting and it could be awesome track.
But now it needs to be produced better - for example drums sound is to weak and simple.

Nice :)