I like the guitars and melodic content. The texture is a little over-saturated, though. I think you need to dial back the reverb and other mixing effects. The harmonies also get in each other’s way a bit, and I suspect there are also a few wrong notes in here given the atonality at 1:20 and other places. The structure is repetitive, and overall the piece doesn’t feel very fleshed-out compositionally. I think you should invest in a higher-quality mic, practice creating some smoother rhythmic syncopations, and try to add some more prominent, dynamic melodic content. Still, if you clean up the mix and cultivate your guitar skills a little more, this could be a really cool, atmospheric track. Keep at it, Abatarr! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
0/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
.25/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.25/1
Composite score
2/10