Hell fucking yes! There's so much good that pointing out the negatives is almost wrong. I mean this is like 8/9 out of 10. I think the mix just needs some love. It's loud, bombastic. But you have a heavy compressed vocal, and a cluttered bottom end. Just sharpen up the mix and go make money.
Author Comments
A sad ish song with a crapload of guitars.
I used my newest drum library here.
LYRICS:
I've got nothing to say here
I only wancha to stay
For longer
But as time
Flows on we're helpless
I don't have any clue why
All the things we would do
Turned out so
Bitter, they
Wither away now
Gone is the softness
Of sunlight at the door?
Why is all the goodness
Not here anymore?
Thought we might build a fortress
Keeping bad days away
Forever
Eternally seeking questions
Shadows gather inside
Deep inside your heart
Can't you hear
Future days come near?
Please don't ever stop.
Credits & Info
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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