I like the gritty bass at the beginning, even if it sounded a tad dry and repetitive. The beat at :10 is nice, and I like the sense of climax into :21. The texture is still pretty minimal, though, and lacks fill in the mid and treble range. You have a good sense of rhythm and progression, but I think the composition in this piece is pretty bland overall. The production quality is good, but I wanted to hear more melodic content and harmonic depth. The dreamy bridge at 1:17 is nice, and I like how the piece maintains its ominous edge during that section. You do a good job with the phrasing and sense of direction through this section, especially with the volume automations and such. The pitch-bending and other mixing effects at 2:10 are cool, but I was a little disappointed with the anti-climax at 2:21. After that, there’s very little novel content in this piece. Overall, the production quality, sound design, and atmosphere are solid, but I really would’ve liked to see a more fleshed out composition and full texture here. Keep at it, CryNN! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.25/1
Composite score
6/10

It's sad I didn't cry, but the asonance at approximately 2min.10sec. shook me. I think it would be the best emotional carrier if it was dominating the song, letting the distorted synths in the background for giving a touch of harmony (because only a few could keep listening to detuned notes forever! ;) ). In overall, it need more variety, but I'm sur you can experiment some great gems.

Very cool. I love how this Rezz style is picking up.
The background synths for atmosphere work perfect.

Keep it up! Loving this!

In general, not bad but there are a couple of minuses, the music is not rich, there are a couple of effects that do not fit into the music, the music initially looks dark but how the melody appears it does not look so dark.

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