I found a rare gem today :) such a great song! great work :D

this is too good; how u so underrated

xd xd

I like the relaxed mood at the beginning and the nature sound effects. The atmosphere is really dreamy, although I think you could’ve used a smoother transition into the section at :23. Same thing with :47, in fact. The melodies at :47 are enjoyable, and there’s a great sense of climax into 1:19. I’m enjoying the blissful melodies at the drop, although sometimes I think your melodies have a little too much complexity to be able to grasp them fully. Memorable melodies are often simpler in my experience, and it’s probably that they have too many notes (rather than the rhythmic components) that bother me. The re-intro at 2:09 was enjoyable, and really heightened the contrast between the various moods and energy levels of the piece. The production quality here is excellent, btw. I enjoyed the mixing effects and additional synths you used on the second drop; they added a great sense of variety and finality to the composition. The outro is simple, yet effective, although the blip/mic pop at the end was a little jarring, especially given how loud it is relative to the piano chords. Overall, strong work with the sound design, harmonic content, mixing, and atmosphere. Despite my complaints about the compositional details, you really nailed this track in most regards I can think of. Keep up the good work, CamicalMusic! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.5/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
9.5/10

Brilliant production quality and a very upbeat and catchy track!