Something i would recommend to help, would be to add a soft gliding melody over the top, i think it would make the tune pop alot more, also, you should make sure you master the "drop" section a bit better, maybe use an equalizer to separate the high medium and low ends of the track, because the low end synth was a bit harsh, even for the style. otherwise though, good stuff this would make some awesome bossfight music! i really enjoyed listening, looking forward to hearing it develop :)