I'm not a fan whatsoever of these soft drums; I don't know how extensive Beaterator is in terms of built-in effect plugins and what not, but try boosting the volume of both your kick and snare by about 4-6db and EQ the kick to stand out more around the 95hz range and the snare around the 220hz-400hz range. You'll find the kick 'kicks' more and the snare has more of a nice crispy sound to it, which is important in DNB. The melodic bits are great though.
That being said, it's definitely not a bad composition. I kind of liked it, feels like a nice liquid tune to play in the background. Especially the piano just blends in well with the feel of the track and the strings accompany that feel brilliantly. Good job.