Not bad! Your vocal effect mix is a bit heavy so it's hard to understand what he's saying but I'm digging it!
"Bullets won't work Jon.
Every shot you take will be a failure;
and you shall reap the consequences of your ways."
Gorefield is a fascinating twist on such an innocent cartoon comic. I love the way things with a vibrantly cute nature can be almost "corrupted" into these eldritch-like horrors. Vice versa as well. I wanted to hop on this bandwagon with a brief bit of fun. I liked doing this voice and I think I will do some more with him once I get a little more scripting. Perhaps even some reads from the comics/creepypastas of it.
Credits:
Voice: Me
Music: Kevin Macleod "Night Break"
Not bad! Your vocal effect mix is a bit heavy so it's hard to understand what he's saying but I'm digging it!
This was the most moving piece of music I have ever witnessed in my entire life. The tremendous highs, the thunderous lows. It scared the hell out of me right down to my ballsack. I aint gonna lie, I was terrified like satan was whispering in my ear, must be due to my sweet earphones.
After hearing the piece I was unfortunately struck by a falling toilet that had come out of a overhead plane, however luckily I had already written my will. Which was to leave Snark to play this musical wonder piece at my funeral. As the funeral filled with guests, Snark nervously played with his tie. It's okay you got this whispered his wife.
He went out and dramatically played the song. As the piece scared the absolute shit out of every single person in the audience, a secret door was revealed in the middle of the passage. In it was the plans to a hidden adventure for every guest to find magical gold. Snark was amazed, what...was going on he thought. In fact, it was so puzzling that even ANOTHER Snark is reading this asking HIMSELF what the hell is going on. Thats right, Snark-ception my friend.
As Snark realised the amazing potential of this musical piece, he decided to play it at more locations, unfortunatly it started to turn people into zombies. As the world descended into chaos and ruin all due to Snarks fault. We sit and wonder, should we blame him?
So the only ones left of the story are future alien beings that found the earth in ruins from Snarks sillyness and they decided they really liked the song, in fact in the future of the year 5000AD music has evolved to only scary snarling noises.
So as a future alien, I rate you 5/5 my good sir. Good job.
Nice tale Eggy xD I would be horrified if this became the basis of music. Honored, but horrified :P
Very good and amazing work!
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