I like the sound design and atmosphere at the beginning. The eastern-sounding instrument at :07 is cool, and the pitch-bending on it at :14 was a nice touch. The pads and percussion are also valuable additions to the texture, and the blissful mood here is great. The piece has a strong sense of climax into :37, and the melodic content is really catchy and fun. The mix sounds a bit over-compressed, though, and overall the arrangement and rhythm section of the piece are pretty generic. The breakdown at 1:38 is effective, although I would’ve appreciated some more variation on the melodies during the second half of the piece. The distorted bit at 2:20 was a nice touch, too. Your style reminds me a lot of EnV. Overall, solid production quality, mood, sound design, melodies, and atmosphere. My main complaints are the lack of originality in the structuring and the lack of variety.
Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.5/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
9/10
Sylux03 
