This one wasn't that bad. The guitar did have a few issues with timing but it wasn't like your others. You really do need to work on singing. I think the problem ks that you're trying to sound like a rock singer but it makes you sound really weird...
Author Comments
Kind of a breakout of the movie... a metal kinda groove with some vocals... Will look at the results later.
Newer version of song.... Lyrics are.....
V1.
I see nothing!
But a fool.
Waste his time,
To try and rule the world.
Just a freak!
With no good skills.
Just a bad hair day,
And nothing more.
Bridge.......
V2
Shoot my face off!
You cannot miss.
There are forces,
You don't want to mess with.
Crack my hardware!
And steel my codes.
You will never,
get full control..
..........
More lyrics to come...
johnnyq1233 responds:
No! I know I'm not a rock star.. These songs are recorded at the moment and off the cuff...
If i like what has gone down I'll try and work on it. But, for the most of this stuff, it is ideas and possibilities that are here.
Voice too loud!!!
What a pity.
Guitar is so awesome.
johnnyq1233 responds:
This was the first run and I plan on making some updates! Thanks for the feedback.
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3.49 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- May 5, 2019
- 10:47 PM EDT
- Genre
- Heavy Metal
- File Info
- Song
- 8.6 MB
- 3 min 45 sec
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