This is my first song ever and I'm very proud of it!

Info:
BPM: 128
Key: C# minor/D# minor
Production Time: 10-12 hours

Self-reflection: While I'm still proud of my first song, there's things I need to make sure I fix. One is repetitivity. Almost everything ranging from the melody to the transitions are repetitive. From now on, I'll try to come up with as many unique melodies as I can and make sure every transition is unique in its own way. Another being instruments. I used strings, choirs and a piano to make up the orchestral parts, but I still think I could've used more emotionally-driving instruments. I don't know what I could've used but I'm sure I'll figure it out. I suppose mixing/mastering could be one of them but I'll leave that up to you guys.