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✩ Song: Stay with Me
✩ Artist: DoctorNoSense
✩ Composer: DoctorNoSense
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Lyrics:

I cant be
I cant hear
I cant run because the road ends here
I cant see
I cant be
So please answer do you stay with me?
Are you gonna stay with me?
Waiting for the end of me?
Fight against our enemies?
Are you gonna stay with me?

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I like the chopped vocals at the beginning and the atmosphere. Elements of the sound design are a bit cliche, though (like the pads), and the vocals get a bit repetitive after a while. The lead vocals at :58 are nice, although the lyrics are pretty generic. I think you could have some smoother transitions in this piece, like at :57 and 1:36. I also think the piece gets rather repetitive after the second verse is simply a repeat of the first. That said, the production quality is strong, and I like the rhythmic components of the piece. The piece comes together well with the variations on the chopped vocal section at 3:52, although the ending was a bit sudden. I also would’ve liked to see you add a breakdown or bridge at some point to add some more shape to the composition. Overall, though, solid work with the mixing and mastering, melodies, and atmosphere. Keep at it, DoctorNoSense! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
8.5/10

DoctorNoSense responds:

Woooow thx for your feedback <3
I still have many problems writing lyrics, but I keep working on it :3

Great production and atmosphere.
Loving the vocals a lot!

Hear every track of yours that I hear amazes me, keep up the good work >u<

DoctorNoSense responds:

Thx <3

Beautiful piece and simply perfect.

DoctorNoSense responds:

Thx ^^

Nice, this has to be one of your best songs yet! :)

DoctorNoSense responds:

Thx ^~^

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Uploaded
Apr 27, 2019
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Genre
Dance
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6.2 MB
4 min 29 sec
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