I cant really tell if I like it or not
music is all about intent. no musical choice is inherently bad, as long as you make it clear to the listener that you are commiting to that decision. with this in mind, is the whole phasing/desync thing intentional? I cant tell if at times you're just genuinely out of time, or you were phasing the whole couple of seconds and I just didnt catch on. if this is what you're going for, try keeping one of the parts more consistent, as a grounding level so that it sounds intentional that the other one is going nuts
another comment is that the little pulse that you have going the whole track (the part playing the chords) can be quieter once the moving melodic parts come in. you've already established it into the peice so it's better to let it fall back so the melody can take the spotlight.
tl;dr I cant tell if you're phasing on accident or on purpose, make your intentions clearer within the peice (sounds abstract but I mean it)