I like some of the elements in this track. The bass/kick combo is bang on. Suits the genre pretty well.
Some of the vocals and ad-libs are a little weird IMO. I can't really complain about much else though. The mix suits the genre this is trying to emulate, the synths and progressions are all pretty decent. There's some change-ups in there to keep things interesting, but near the middle it does get a little stale for me.
Overall, good stuff. Not exactly my favourite flavour but it was pretty well executed. Keep at it man.