The Goods: The mix and its transients are on point. Your bass is kicking and the overall vibe is is solid for a House mix. If anything I would boost a few sounds like the vocal chops at 5min (Love that sound btw)
Things I would improve: Overall arrangement. I would try in future projects to really explore where you could take your 1st, 2nd, 3rd, etc...ideas to create more variety and tone. We catch a bit of this
in the 2 min mark where you FINALLY introduce another sound to carry the arpeggio.
To keep listeners engaged you wanna take them on a "Journey."
Eg. would be your 3 min mark, I would have cut the highs on the arp to send it more in the back and bring up that new melody sound and then work on your build up again back into the chorus.
DEFINITELY PLAY WITH MORE AUTOMATION!!!
Also this songs reminds of this https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/37312
arps work in the same way despite the difference genres, but notice how his breaks don't have the main motif...he's building it up again or when he introduces new sounds he's automating the volume or filter of the arp in the background.
This is all I have to say, if you would like more tips, feel free to drop me a DM.