It is mixed well, but... lacks direction.

I think it needs a progression of dynamics. Start small, add, be big, go home, come back with chocolate, and then add another instrument.

too plucky. and the saxophone is off in some parts.

Something seems off.
Not just in this song...
It seems like the amount of songs you are pumping out this month is degrading from the songs themselves. Look at dirtypaws for example. They produce less songs but every single one of them is catchy, even though it is the forbidden genre that must not be discussed. I am a very honest person when it comes to reviewing. The truth is, I don’t hear any synths. There is that pluck bass thing but I don’t actually know.
I don’t know what’s missing.
I can’t quite pinpoint it.
Sidechain?
Maybe.
I am so bad at reviewing

Like it