Really professional sounding!

Awesome 11/10

Great chords and feel to this track mate. Some sound patches could use a little reworking so they're less abbrasive, like the lead that comes in at .48 secs. It's quite loud and overbearing. It's the right idea though. Also some mixing issues with the dynamics of the track. Seems like it's been highly brickwalled on the master or something. There's lots of focus on the leads and mids, I'd say work on getting the mix right, bring the bass in, take the mids down a lot.

Very nice chords and arrangement though, hopefully some of these comments help. Keep going mate

edit: reading back it sounded harsher than when I was writing it. Please don't think I'm being mean, it's just because I really liked the track and think it has a lot of potential. I never normally write reviews. Good work!

I love the set up here and I think you're on to something amazing!

Here is what my ear wants to hear:

BASS BASS BASS BASS

More Dynamic changes to the volume

But this sticks together so well already, it sounds like victory to me! I really love the sounds you use in the reintroduction at around 1:20

Honestly I love this a lot and I think with more composition this could be insanely fresh, maybe it's part of the mood I'm in right now but I just wanna vibe off what you got here so far.

Keep grinding!

Wow