Yeah, this is nice ima do a full review.
The opening is cool. The vocals sound too muddled, you should remove low end.
The kick in the start has too much reverb and it takes up a lot of space. When the main instrument comes in around 00:35, everything has so much reverb that it just sounds drowned. The piano is in a different key which doesn't work.
In fact, during the second part, the same reverb problem occurs. At 1:48, the guitar chords are also overtaken by bass from the kick.
Overall in this track, the kick neeeeeds to lose the reverb, and be lowered. Other than that, this is nice.