Hrm, does need lots of mastering, but overall, It's a good start :DD
it's distorted in the drop.
You need to learn how to manage volumes, and turn some down, and others up, but mostly down, so they can go together witout becoming distorted.
this has alot of potentioal, with a little bit of practice, I see you pumping out great songs :DD
During the louder parts the sound gets distorted, but the melody itself is very nice.
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