I like the bright piano riff at the beginning and the crisp drums. The atmosphere and bass at :14 are nice, although the drums are a little loud. The vocals at :27, although I thought the pitch automations on them at :33 were a little cheesy. Same thing with :53. The production quality and rhythmic aspects of the piece are really good, though. At some point, I wanted to hear some stronger melodic content and structural contrast. The composition of the piece just needed a bit more shape - adding an emotional breakdown, atmospheric bridge, or minimal piano solo all would’ve helped. The harmonic content gets very repetitive towards the end, and there isn’t a strong sense of climax or resolve either. Still, the production quality and sound design are top-notch here. Keep at it, Snakewine! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
2/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8/10

Very heavy and intricate rhythmically.
Great production and main synths. Heavy.
Heaaavyyyyyy.
And the combo of those + vocals + the tribal battle rhythms make up for something quite fresh sounding.
Great job!

Amazing ! :D

Super powerful! Love it!

woah, i enjoy this!!