I really enjoyed it :D
One small things you should keep in mind:
- I don't know where the "Cracking" is coming from and it occurs through the whole song.
- In my personal opinion, I guess you should turn the Guitar a bit down, it was kinda louder than your voice (or maybe its your recording room + reverb? not sure xD).
Your voice is very enjoyable and fits perfect with the guitar!
great piece overall!