I like the gradual fade-in of the atmospheric synths at the beginning. I think you left a little too much of the mid-range tones in the sub-bass, though. It takes up too much of the mix there, especially relative to the harmonies. I also thought the transition at :54 was pretty sudden. The composition comes together pretty well by the end, and the production quality is solid here. That said, the piece needs a bit more emotional contrast, and the sudden ending leads me to believe that it isn’t quite finished. I’m also a bit concerned by the lack of originality in the sound design and arrangement. The sub-bass sounds like it’s straight out of 3xOsc, and the synths are a bit cheesy, too. That said, the mixing and mastering, melodies, atmosphere, and rhythmic content are all keeping this piece afloat. Keep at it, AsgoreD! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.5/1
Composite score
7/10