haha very much sounds like persian trance right off the bat :)
and a nice unique sound from you! Congrats! It doesn't sound like a space chase this time hahaha :P
percussion feels perfect.. although I don't know if im digging the dirty lead, although it gets better as it pitches up.. I find the leads are cool but you haven't given them any room, so its like your percussion is like a sausaage of sound from left to ride overlaid on top of the leads - the low levels are just drowned out utterly, but as it raises up it pokes through a bit.
Then when the egyptian part is brought in it too is drowned out - I think maybe with some side chaining or proper eqing you could balance this out a lot better and have yourself a great tune without levels interfering :)
great attempt though - and that bass and percussion is stellar - I think you may have just made it a bit too powerful to the point that nothing else can fit in the mix :)