Beginning piano could of used some complexity (maybe some velocity variation as well), and I find most of the sound leans to the left ear too much, making it unbalanced. The flute sounds that come in is quite good. Overall, you did fit the bill of the them you were given, so good job.
Author Comments
This is the third requested piece from themes given to me from the Newgrounds community.
The theme for this one was requested by belthagor, and the theme was "A walk in the park"
For this one I composed what I just imagined a peaceful stroll through a park's soundtrack would be like. "How nice, the sun's shining, the flowers are in full bloom, couples are walking along arm in arm, children are playing on the swings, oh dear, there's a crazy homeless person don't make eye contact don't make eye contact... phew, that was close. Oh, and there's a dog chasing a squirrel up a tree, and what an adorable bird... how pleasant. ^^
GreyHooves responds:
Thanks for the critique! I admit that I do generally lean towards simplicity the happier a piece sounds for whatever reason :P
But I definitely do hear what you're saying about the panning. When you work on something for so long it makes it hard to mix appropriately. Wish I had someone to mix and master my music for me :P
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- 1 min 37 sec
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