Another Trance
Surprised you actually did a heavy metal song. Anyway does have the trance like theme to it. Lots of spacy flute and its quite powerful. The background trancy part is almost overpowered by the flute. I suppose its all about the flute player. I think you could have mixed up the drums. The kick and clap drums are good but no transition to fast drums to get the trancy feeling (aka head bobbing :) ) Back to the beginning. The flute with that one other instrument accompanying it...based on the other instrument (not the flute) it is off tune or maybe it is in tune but the note you chose didn't fit with flute. Hmm hard to explain but you know how you have 3 notes accompanying flute. Plays one note for a bit (call it A) than go down a pitch (call it B) and up a pitch or two (call it C). I'm talking about part A. That note didn't fit. There we go. Hope you understood.
On to the flute. Your playing a bunch of notes which is good for the difficulty factor. It changes up a bit and returns back to the same pattern. Typical of trance. Usually I don't mind the repetition in trance, but because you got a overpowering flute, hearing it hit those high pitch notes over and over again gets noxious to the ears. The solution to this while maintaing the flute player theme would be to change up the flute. Say use the spacy flute your using then switch up to say a pop flute, than a muted flute, etc.. Besides that I think you did a good composition. You went all crazy with the flute....maybe a little too much. Need to go more crazy with the drums. The synths and pads got you this time. This rarely happens to you; all your songs seem to have awesome sound choices but this one got you. Hope my review helped you. I also hope you see this as helpful advice rather than my whiny complaints. :) Good luck with your next song and have fun with it. Bye for now
DoobyTimePiece 
