I made this at about 4am in the morning when my GF was asleep, so was limited to what I could do vocal wise. You know if I woke her up, I would have been crucified, or relegated to living in the shed. The lyrics were not practiced at all and I went freestyle on quite a few bars. I compressed quite a lot of the tracks to get the vocal track to sit better, but even now I think I should have upped the gain on the vocals. Thanks for your comment on the overall beat, I don't usually make rap songs, and I just liked the overall flow of the song. I'm no singer by any stretch of the imagination, I hate my voice personally and usually autotune the shit out of it, but I always put a raw track into it as I like the natural chorus effect it gives off. I usually don't produce something so raw, and unfinished, but I wanted to show my neighbour a new beat which I came up with as he spits bars all the time and I'm hoping to do a project with him in the near future, as he's an excellent vocalist. He's also been through the wars a bit and he has come up with some useful lyrics. I did do a bit of rap on a song called "Relationship issues" which I took a lot of time making sure it was the best I could possibly do. Also I did another song called "Picture Frame", which I did multiple voicing for and nearly sounded like Dre.

Thanks anyway for your constructive comment, I find its rare people give me any comments on my tunes these days, and these comments usually are along of the lines of simply "Cool track" or "thats crap, eat shit and die". Thanks again dude, things will get improved.